WALT persuade people to build/not build a factory on our courts.
I believe that they should build a factory on our courts.
We should build a factory on our courts so our school could get the CCTV cameras so there will be no criminals stealing our school property. The people who is trying to steal our stuff and our school property they will be seen because of the CCTV camera.
Saint Patrick school agree with the factory because Room 5 could get a new playground. Having a new playground could make us feel happy.
Building a factory would be a fantastic idea because our school would be a bit more exciting and awesome. It could make us happy by getting a CCTV camera. We should build the factory so we can have a competition.
Designing a new playground would be a nice thing to do for Saint Patrick's school. Having a factory at school could change our school. If our school could have a competition and the winners get to design the playground it would be awesome and it would be also fear for other people.
1 comments:
Hello Vine!
I really like this persuasive text about a factory. Keep up the good work. I can not wait to see more blog post on your blog.
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